Saturday, March 11, 2017

U Yong Chung/ chapter1 part5 B2/ wed 1~2

 The two similar topic essay "How Your Birth Order Influences Your Life Adjustment" and "Born for Each Other" are talking about birth orders that influences in our given life. I also agree with the authors because birth orders are also a factor that can influences people's environment which effect the one's personality. However, what Lucille K.Forer and Pamela Withers said is slight different in my case.


 First of all, I'm the youngest child of my family but first topic of essay shows that youngest child tends to think they are less able to do many things than other people. However, I usually do my house works by myself and I think I'm kind of parental in our house. I live with my older brother together but he is not a good house worker, so I usually tell him what to do or I just do the works instead of him what is he's responsibility in home. Therefore as the youngest child of my family I think that my role and my older brother's role is reversed.


 Secondly, Pamela Withers who is the writer of second topic of essay said that a youngest brother of brothers will match best with whom he will allow to control his life in a unobtrusive manner. I totally agree with this idea because I prefer a unobtrusive manner than some kind of manner like hovering over people. However, some of my friends who are youngest brother of brothers prefer a obtrusive manner which require care or interest to them similar in their home.

 Two author's opinion about relations between birth order and life style, I was interested to this topic and learned new things about. I cannot say I totally agree with the author's opinion about the youngest one of the family but it is pretty similar in generality of cases. I cannot say that the whole author's idea matches with my case, but this topic and essay give a chance to reminding me of the role in my family and birth order which could have influenced my personality.



2 comments:

  1. Hi I'm Sungtae Kim. I really enjoyed reading your essay. It was interesting to read about the experience which is totally different from mine. Also it was interesting to see some cases that are different from the essay, because in my case I felt that this essay is quite accurate.
    The whole essay was quite well organized. The introduction and conclusion matched well. As reading I found some grammatical flaws like the last part of first sentence in concluding paragraph. Maybe you should change it like 'learned new things' or 'learned new things about it'. Other than that it was great. Thanks for sharing good essay!

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  2. Hello, I'm Sangwon Park. This writing was easy to read that I can easily understand your thinking and I have a identical opinion, too. I heard that in writing a short sentence is better than a long sentence. If you change your long sentences into short sentences, your essay will be more great. Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed to read your essay.

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