Why do people work?
In almost every culture people work because work is a reward for it. I think that the nature of people is liking playing but in fact, I do not think anyone would really be able to do it if I told them to play without doing anything.
People work in almost every culture of the world. There will be no one who does not work at all, and never has ever done it. I thought of why people do work and I thought 2 reasons.
The first reason is that you will be compensated if you work. Since the collapse of the Soviet Union, all nations of the world are capitalist societies. In a capitalist society, as much as he has worked, he receives compensation for his work and runs his own life through it. If you work harder, you get more compensation. Therefore, those who work harder than others will be able to live a better life than others who are not.
The second reason is related to human nature. The personality of many people, including myself, can be thought of as enjoying playing. But if you ask me to play for life, do not do anything, and I will not. Almost everyone will. I think that human nature likes to work and play.
In conclusion, I think people work to live a better life than others. The ant in the Aesop's fable "The ant and the grasshopper" also worked to live a better life than other animals in order to be rewarded for their work. As a result, the ant could safely lived cold winter. In capitalist society, where people are compensated for their work, people have the desire to stand out from others. It is also because the nature of man likes not to enjoy playing but to do work and play together. People are living more personally by doing their jobs.
Thanks for sharing your essay. I'm Sungtae Kim from same class. I enjoyed your essay. This is an interesting opinion because I thought that working is a basic nature of human. But after reading your essay I had to reconsider my thoughts about this. Your writing was very persuasive but there was some mistakes. About pronouns, it made readers confusing, so I suggest you to use specific nouns instead. Also I found some grammatical errors. But overall this was a good essay.
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Hello, I am Hyobin Jeon from same class. I really enjoyed your writing abour why people in the world work hard. Especially, the construction of your writingis very good because it suggests two reasons supproting your main opinions clearly. If you correct your grammatical errors a little bit more, it will be a more better writing then. Thank you for sharing your opinions with me!
ReplyDeleteHello, I'm Minyong Han from P&P.
ReplyDeleteI liked your writing, and it conveys some concrete messages. I actually wrote my essay on the same topic as yours, and I think our messages are similar in a few ways. As Sungtae said before, there was vague wording and it made me read repeatedly to understand what you had to say. If you work on it, you will be better in writing! Thanks!
Hi, I'm Hye-ri from your class.
ReplyDeleteI chose same topic as yours, so I read your writing, comparing with mine. I could think that one of the reason is capitalism as a sociel factor. It really makes sense. I want for you to put some examples in the second body part. Then your idea will be clearer and easier to understand. Thank you for sharing!