Why Friendship Break Apart
There are many important relationship in our life, however friendship may be the one of the most valuable. To live without having friendship, is tragic in human's life. Interaction between people is a necessary thing to live on, but friendship could make our life more prosperous. The famous American animator Trey Parker talked about a friendship and said, "I've learned that all a person has in life is family and friends. If you lose those, you have nothing, so friends are to be treasured more than anything else in the world." There are many lines which show friendships are important and we could not define friendship in one meaning. However, we know not all friendships last forever, and breaking up can be incredibly awkward and uncomfortable no matter how old we are. Then why friendship break apart?
First of all series of small misunderstanding affect friendship. Big problems can sometimes be solved by talking it out, but small problems between friendship usually not taken care or unnoticed. For example, being late for a appointment for a few minutes, trivial pranks which might feel offended to opponent and not pay the money back to friend etc are the small misunderstanding in friendship. Those trivial misunderstanding at some point, get completely out of control and come out with an outburst. This outburst in friendship will probably ended with breaking off badly.
Instead of trivial misunderstanding, a big fight between two friends may cause to ending a relationship. A big fight is the cause of deep rifts between people who thought they were a good friend. However, this bad occasion won't ever make friendship go back to when it was a close relationship. They cannot reunite even if they had reconciliation to each other. Because they already hurt their feeling and disappointed at what they did it to each other. A big fight with friend is the worst reason to break up a relationship.
There are many reasons why friendship ends in breaking up. It could be a outcome of complicated relationship in nowadays. A meaning of friendship is changing to more trivial relationship instead of deep relationship which was usually understood in past. This is mainly why many friendship break apart. We should think carefully about breaking apart with friends whatever the reason was.
Hi I'm Soyoung from the same class with you. I enjoyed your writing because it's interesting to read your examples about breaking apart with friends which make me easy for me to understand and I emphasized your opinions. so I think you thought carefully about the topic. Also, I think your writing's organization which has a clear beginning, middle, and end is logical. expecially, It's good to use a question at the beginning. I think it is better to add examples about causes of big fights like the examples about small misunderstandings. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Ye Eun from your class. I really enjoyed your writing. Especially I like the way to start writing. I think it was nice to quote Trey Parker's sentence. It was interesting. Also I like organization of writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing!